Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Veterinarian
I would like to be a veterinarian when I grow up anyways, because I have a passion for animals. when I become I veterinarian I'm coming to help abused animals find great homes to feel safe in. I want to help animals off the streets and take of them. If I could take them in myself I would, but I cant my mom doesn't really like animals. I had a passion for animals since I was younger and it just grew on me. When I become a veterinarian i want to become the person who goes out and rescue the animals, and bring them back somewhere safe. Every animal deserve to be happy.
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Take out 'anyways' in the beginning sentence. Capitalize the 'w' in when. 'I'm [going]...'
ReplyDeleteTake out in after safe.
'I want to [keep] animals...' and 'take [care]
Overall, good story :)
i like this
ReplyDeleteWow should be my dog vet. its thoughtful of how you think about animals and how you know what you for ur carerr in life!
ReplyDeleteI feel you on that.
ReplyDeleteA few errors but pretty good.
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